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I am writing to tell you about the two places here in England. I am happy to
hear you have new job. How are you?
Now let me tell you about the two places. They are both large towns in the south of England. Reading is close to London so you can visit there at the weekend. Bournemouth is by the sea and has a very good beach and is a holiday place for English families.
There is no pollution in Bournemouth, but there is pollution in Reading as there is too much traffic and many traffic jams. In the evening there are many things to do in both places. There are lots of cinemas, night-clubs and theatres. Everything closes at midnight so you canít stay up too late.
are very nice places
to walk and meet
your friends, England
has very nice parks and
green. I hope you enjoy
the new job and find
I look forward to hearing from you in the near future. I hope to
see you soon.