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Here is the correct version of the letter. The changed parts are in green.

Dear John,

I am writing to tell you about the two places here in England. I am happy to

hear you have new job. How are you?

 Now let me tell you about the two places. They are both large towns in the south of England. Reading is close to London so you can visit there at the weekend. Bournemouth is by the sea and has a very good beach and is a holiday place for English families.

There is no pollution in Bournemouth, but there is pollution in Reading as there is too much traffic and many traffic jams. In the evening there are many things to do in both places. There are lots of cinemas, night-clubs and theatres. Everything closes at midnight so you canít stay up too late.

There are very nice places to walk and meet your friends, England has very nice parks and everywhere is green. I hope you enjoy the new job and find it interesting. I look forward to hearing from you in the near future. I hope to see you soon.

best wishes